For this elevator pitch, I made sure to incorporate feedback from my last two pitches. I focused on explaining why my service is different and better than other similar services and also focused on the three main benefits my service will provide to dog owners.
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ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job on your elevator pitch. I think your additions to it were very good. I don't have many things to say to it to make it better. I think that maybe introducing yourself at the beginning of it could be a nice addition just so your viewers know who you are and where you are coming from. Great job!
Hey, nicely done one your third iteration of your pitch. I think your skills in presenting your venture concept have improved to the point you can succinctly, effectively, and enthusiastically deliver your idea to a venture capitalist, a group, or a class. This will help you with the next assignment greatly. I’ve enjoyed seeing your pitches improve through the semester.
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